Mr Joe Posnanski I liked the way you analogized boxing with another sport like football to show how situations can be similar. One thing i didn't like about that though was more than half of the article was about football. I can understand if it was meant to compare two sports, but it wasn't.I also how didn't like how you criticized what people wore to boxing matches obviously its common and it shouldn't be an issue. I think that you should have spoken more about the boxing match that took place since your first phrase in the article was "This will be about boxing,".
When you actually began to talk about the boxing match between Floyd Mayweather, and Victor Ortiz you stated that Mayweather outclassed Ortiz the first three rounds. I think that you should have explained what Mayweather did to outclass him. Also Your article was very one sided and you didn't give Mayweather the credit he deserved for the win. This article would have been much better if it was more about the boxing match and less bias about how Mayweather's win came.
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